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Sadly sounds the wind in moaning sighs,Reciting its poetry to the evening skies,Laments in rhymes and no one to share,held in a strange isolated sad love affair.What a similarity I find in my ways,The...

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Sad and lovely, Pharo..should be put to music and sung.....

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Thank you for reading, I appreciate it, I haven't been writing to much I am enjoyingthe sunny days and doing a little fixin's around the house. I got me a little pup (Female)solid brown - looks like a...

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I don't know whether the change of line length was deliberate or accidental, but to me it had the effect of intensifying the mood. Great job if this is so?.I really enjoyed this if you can enjoy...

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Powerful and intense and so sad. Lovely work, Pharo - I agree it would make a wonderful song...

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I enjoyed this one also.your friend ombrages

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This is simply lovely!An elegy in gray, a bards lay in lament!I am glad I read this one!"My eyes still glint with the things I've Seen My feet still know The Way within my dreams."- Luke

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Well written pharo,tender and sad definiyelyshould be put to music! Well done.

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